Statement of purpose review

[coolejungenhihi]

Hi,

I'm a Mathematical Engineering student who wants to pursue an MSc in Mathematical Finance in the upcoming year at a high-tier UK institution (Oxford, ICL, UCL,...).

I have just finished my Statement of Purpose, but I have no idea if it's any good. As I come from a poor background, no one in my environment works in the financial sector or has any experience in this.

I would really appreciate it if someone experienced with this could judge my letter and warn me for 'mistakes' I made. This would help me a lot!

Thanks for your consideration

 

[Qui-Gon]

I come from a similar background -- feel free to PM me your personal statement and I will happily look it over.